Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 9:46 pm Post subject: Monster Girl Challenge
Back in the shoutbox, Oblimo posted a challenge to write short stories, or perhaps longer pieces using one of these girls. And he posted a bit called Echidna, focused around a hero and the title named beastie.
And here's my contribution, a little number with a Gargoyle Girl, and a world hopping Lt.
Gargoyle Girl
“You wanna run this by me again?” I rolled my eyes at her question. I’d explained it twice. I looked at her as arrows covered in wicked, unforgiving, holy smite shrieked over our cover and our heads, while some ate away at it. I ticked off my fingers summing the previous twelve hours of my life.
“I’m from another world. I got transported while on a training run for my military. I landed in your world. I landed in sight of some kill-em-all zealots of whatever ‘light god’ runs this area. I run while my tech gets used to this atmosphere.”
I blind-fired my auto-handgun around the overturned alter; which we were using for cover. If the statues are an indication, worshipped the Green Man. The alter looked like it was made to grip something wide, thick, and soft. If I wasn’t being attacked by the damn Spanish Inquisition; the nerd in me would have been studying ever little rune and dirty pictograph on it.
A man screamed in agony, and a few people shouted a in rage and woe. My guns can rip through their plate armor like hot, depleted uranium, knives through butter. But this is no game; I’m not letting them test how good their ‘arrows of holy-light’ do against my ‘armor of the venom beast’. I just HAD to pick this ‘Scorpio’ decal theme... looks badass though, and the purple is a nice bonus.
“Where was I?” I looked to the woman peeking over the edge of our cover, wide eyed at what I’d just done. I refuse to think of her her a ‘devil’ or anything like what the zealots were screaming. So she’s animated rock; so she has wings, so she’s got all that gold bondage bling... Okay that last part is a bit odd.
“Atmosphere.” She mumbled, looking at my pistol with wet lips, two pairs of them. DAMN, she had an ass... and that tail, looked like she could use the end like a mace. Hmm idea for later...
“Right, so I wind up at the bottom of your tower, nice place by the way, around sundown-ish. They chanced me in; They’re big guns show up and started firing their crazy light arrows so I actually have to dodge. I started shooting back. THAT scared off their peasant mob.” I paused as the volley halted, the men dragging their fallen brother back for healing or last rites or something. The gargoyle girl took the chance to comment.
“Thanks for that; if I hurt any townsfolk, I explode.” Wait, what?
“Um, come again?” I turned to her, and she bore a wicked grin.
“That’s for later, Boss-Man.” I swear her eyes are amethyst, and sparkling.
“That’s Lieutenant to you.” I corrected her as she gets up, and approaches a wall. “and you could do with a bit of expounding yourself.” She flashed a smile over her back, her are wings closed tight against her back and her tail seems to coil like a snake, no.... a whip. “Oh shit.” I cover my head just before she spins like a mad ballerina of demolition. I peeked my head out from behind after the sounds of stone against spiritually reinforced stone. Kiss that ass, ferroconcrete.
“How’s that for EX-pounding. She stepped aside; dust floating around her and the gapping hole in the wall, leading to a hall way. Windows robbed of their stain-glass revealed cool night-sky and I took off, catching her artistically narrow waist as the zealots started firing. It didn’t occur to me that I wasn’t wearing an actual POWER armor. I’m a sniper, and all that heavy-duty gear makes it impossible to sneak. I also forget she’s made of FUCKING STONE, magick or otherwise, she’s not moving for anyone but herself, and I’m wrapped round her like a maypole. She lets out a mix of a laugh and a gasp when my fiber-steel crotch guard slams against the crest of her mound.
“Frisky little soldier, eh?” She smirks as she rolls with my motion and spins us out of the hole into cover. “How do I get in here?” She felt up every inch of my torso not covered by thick blue and purple cerami-steel. Being a sniper, there was quite a bit of that.
“Isn’t there a better time for this?” I fired my pistol into the hole, and the men shouted again, same name. I peeked around the cover and saw the same man being dragged off. “SORRY, DUDE! LEARN TO DUCK!” I shouted into the room, not bothering to contemplate the futility of trying to duck bullets from a hand-held railgun.
“I feed on seed, Lieutenant Spermius” She tapped her forearm, and faint red runs glowed. “Unless I get some soon, don’t expect any more special exits.” I glared at her.
“It’s not like you’re doing much besides slowing me down. My name is Dorian, actually.” I snapped at her. That was probably a mistake. Her stone cheeks darkened from something pale like clouds to a dark deep gravelly grey.
“Ex-CUSE me, DORIAN?” Hmm, yeah; that was a mistake. She grabbed me by my throat and forced me across the hall to a stone strut between two large window gaps. “I am a princess of the wind swept rings of the abyss, bound to this stone only by the most powerful of magicks. My memory stretches back to the ages when men, monsters, fae, and angels were at peace and bedded each other with love and no fear of reprisal.” She kept talking but I was more focused on the archers moving to fire glowing arrows into her back. My hands moved faster than their feet and fingers; so a frag grenade, minus the arming pin, landed among them. They blinked, wondering what I’d done. Then they didn’t wonder anything at all. The remaining zealots screamed and fled for their lives; the gargoyle-girl still holding me by my neck against the strut. Her eyes were wide like she’d just received an uncalled for slap.
It was getting hard to breath, actually, in my position.
“Do you, urgh, still want to go on? You were at ‘bedding with love’ and all the rest.” I grunted through a slightly compressed throat. Her skin had felt cool, but soft, silky. There wasn’t any denying the weight though; the power behind her, though, even as she relaxed her grip till my five o’clock shadow scrapped against the pads of her index and thumb and “Um, are you okay?” She looked at me with half lidded eyes; her lips spreading wide as her tail swished behind her. “What are you thinking?” She just grinned and pressed herself against me, her breasts pressed against my breast plate and her arms wrapped around me, just under my arms. “I have a very bad feeling.” I admitted. She tilted her head to the side, adopting this innocent face. Her curved horns and over all ‘devilish’ appearance ruined it.
“About what?” Something was off, I felt lighter. She had lifted me, and was shifting me, to the side. My eyes went wide as her grin bloomed to a grin full of diamonds, and she carried me out the window into the night.
“ABOUT THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS!” I screamed, before forcing my tongue into the back of my mouth. You can’t really describe flying, so I won’t try. But if I ever do anything like this again, I decided in that moment of descent, I better get my own pair of wings first. Possibly a jet pack for good measure. She swept upwards, riding momentum and air warmed by ground to reach the tallest tower. She landed and held me close up until I knew my feet were steady on the ground, and my shaking had stopped. That close to her, I noticed so much more I hadn’t up till then. Small fractures and scratches were now clear on her wings and shoulders. They held a familiar glow, and I realized she’d been covering my ass since we met up after my cross fire had shattered the links connecting her golden binding collar to a large pedestal. “Are you okay?” My first words after that experience are probably the lamest I could have chosen. The red symbols on her body were nearly invisible, and she shook her head.
“Not yet, but I will be... please.” Before her words had been heavy, with the authority that goes with being a ‘princess’, I guess. Standing naked but for the gold enchanted to bind her; she was speaking like she was more powerless than the peasants who fled from my pistol. I tapped a sequence on the underside of my wrist and my armor shrunk and reduced to a pair of armguards. I stood in nothing but a pair of sheer britches; trim, if a bit short.
“That’s how you get in here.” I laughed, but the weakness in her smile quieted me. I looked around for a soft place, and saw the top of the tower was dedicated to a large circular room with large arches leading onto the wide balcony ringing the central room. There were a few smaller rooms, judging from the doors and windows, but my attention focused on the king-sized bed. Complete with four posts, and a canopy. The frame was carved from stone, and it occurred to me that to survive a stone girl’s pleasures; a bed would have to be.
I should have worried about myself, but I was already being led into the chambers, a soft sound of silk met my ears, but the Gargoyle girl led me to the bed before I could register it as curtains being lowered behind me. I did notice the draft changed from a shrill cold to a quiet warmth, somehow. She eased me on the bed and made to slide off my gauntlets. I stopped her.
“If they find us up here-” I started but she kissed me. Cool lips, like the rim of a chilled mug, met mine, and parted them. I fully expected her tongue to be a cool serpent. I was half right. Serpentine as its motions were; the muscle felt warmer and more alive than any girls’ I’d encountered. My head felt lighter, and the stress from running and fighting and killing was finally, resolutely, ebbing. I sank own onto the bed and she broke the kiss.
“The only way to get up here is to fly...” Her tone had fire in it, but it was subdued. Like someone too tired to take the lead they wanted. In fact that’s exactly what it was. She moved to resume the kiss, but stopped, smiled her wicked smile, and snaked her tongue around my Adam’s apple. I gasped, and she shuddered at my reaction, her whole body pressing against me; her hands finding mine, and pushing them outward. She locked her legs until she was grinding against my erection. I swore, and tired to ease her back a bit, but she smiled, her wings shrinking into her back, and her tail smoothing out into a shape less lethal, but still rather invasive.
“Oh Jesus...” I swore; as my underwear suddenly became much more occupied. She dragged it down to my ankles, and did some trick to knot it up. I was bound there, mostly helpless, and like any guy, I ruin the moment. “How’d all this stuff get up here?” If the only way was flying. She looked at me with eyes colder than the sharp breeze sneaking through a gap in the curtains. “Sorry, shutting up.”
She nodded and eased down my legs, spreading my knees until she could slip down between them. The parts of my brain still actively thinking, workaholic dorks, registered that if her tongue had gotten me this hard from a kiss; I should hold no illusions about my orgasmic fortitude.
I really should fire those guys.
I swore a blue streak a mile wide that collapsed into a muddle as the her tongue snaked around my erection. From the head to my balls, everything was covered; I had to look to believe it was actually happening. Even after being transported past the moon to some across dimensions when some guy opened up a ‘world navel’ back on my world; I still founds things beyond belief, somehow.
I forced my eyes open and saw that her tongue was, in fact, wrapped around my dick like gauze on a pharaoh's erection. The tip of her tongue played with the sensitive slit of my urethra while her eyes locked onto mine. I felt weak, helpless, and totally, completely safe. A gust of cold wind on my back was enough to stir the weeks of hard-drilled military tactics I’d been drafted into. My mouth formed the words even as the geek in me battled with my inner pervert for control of my actions.
“It’s a trap.” I spoke it and the geek laughed. The gargoyle girl’s eyes shown brightly while hands as soft as silk and cool as stone eased me back against the bed, almost supine; and the pervert roared in triumph. I looked up into eyes glimmering like topaz and sunlight. She was bigger than the first gargoyle, and her horns curved around, under her ears, rather along the top of her head. Her hands moved from my shoulders to my pectorals. She massaged, groped, explored, and fondled; moving downward until my face hung below her massive, gravity defying, breasts. Indeed, despite her position on all fours, her breasts held to her body the same as if she’d been standing. She leered at my dick as the first gargoyle girl started taking her tongue back into her mouth; all at once, without releasing my dick from her oral organ. When her lips wrapped around the root of my piece; she flashed a grin up to her friend, who looked down at me between the valley of her breasts.
“Don’t bite your tongue now.” She grinned at me. Then the first, girl... oh fuck this.
“What’re your names?” I asked, groaning, before anything else could happen. The girls looked at me; then at each other.
“What?” asked the second.
“Wphb?” asked the first.
“Your names, damnit. I’m expounding in my head and it’s a pain in the ass to say ‘the first’ or ‘the second gargoyle girl’ all the damn time. So, I ask, again: ‘What are your names?’”. The girls looked at each other for a moment. The second looked at me while the first returned her work on my dick. “I’m Polly.” She pointed at herself. “She’s Jamie.” She thumbed down at her friend, who waved without looking up from my penis, or rather, my navel, as my dick was still currently in her mouth. “Happy now?” Polly asked, more than a little impatience in her voice.
“Well I haven’t cum yet.” I smirked, “But I’m getting there...”
“Good. Now, shut up.” Her consistency seemed to shift, or something, and her breasts heeded gravity and fell right onto my face, blinding me, deafening, and also muting me. Though I was breathing just fine, which made the following orgasm less stressful than it might have been.
“MMMMMGAAAFFFPHHHH” was what vibrated back into my ears as I howled into Polly’s titanic breasts, and the echo of a laugh through her stone-flesh told me at least Polly got a laugh out of my reaction. She eased back, and I felt cool stone knees raise me to a reclining position. I was allow sight, sound, and voice again, and what I saw left me speechless.
My dick was gone.
Nah, I’m just messing with you. My dick was fine, still is. What left me speechless was the look on Jamie’s face. It was primal pleasure. It was fulfillment. It was a hunger deeper than anything I’d ever had the chance to encounter. “I’m fucked aren’t I?” I asked Polly, tilted my head a bit toward her face, but not taking my eyes of the voracious visage the literally glowing gargoyle girl wore.
“Yeah.” Polly sighed, happily. “But we’re not a bad bunch of girls.” I opened my mouth to respond, but stopped, thinking about what she just said.
“What do you mean by ‘bunch’?” I looked at Polly as best I could. She smiled and her tail pulled aside one of the bed curtains that had been let loose sometime before. I paled and saw several more gargoyles, of various designs and sizes, eyes glimmering with every color in the rainbow.
“Oh fuck me.” I swore. Then I gripped the bridge of my nose at their unanimous cries of assent.
This is great, and apart from understandable and forgivable grammatical and spelling errors, is well written, though I feel as though your depiction of scenery and character action (tha secks) could use more descriptive work. All in all awesome though.
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Posted: Sat May 16, 2009 3:02 am Post subject:
AdamZero wrote:
first drafts, and the challenge was to get it done. *sips root beer* alright then, someone else take a swing at it! MJM I know your out there!
Damn it, you caught me lurking again. Let me get the music going and I'll try to come up with something. By the way, I have most of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia saved, and translated. There are so many more than those that are on that single page on Oblimo's site.
Tell you what, someone else chose one for me to write about, as long as it's already translated.
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Posted: Mon May 18, 2009 9:24 pm Post subject:
AdamZero wrote:
Post the complete works and it might help us decide.
Well, I posted them on my PBWorks page. They are the complete works since not all of them have been translated and the artist doesn't look like he's going to stop at his current pace. So, enjoy the pics.
I'm trying to work on a Red Oni story (need to turn it to a short story instead of a novel :3). Unfortunately it has been too long for me to write anything more than a few paragraphs.
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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 12:01 am Post subject:
Very wrote:
...and mjm: a story of Scyllas could be interesting
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Scylla:
Scylla family – Mollusc type
Habitat – Ocean
Disposition – Strong-willed
Diet – Carnivorous, mostly fish
A race of aquatic monsters with octopus-like tentacles. Strong and willful, they are natural-born pirates and will attack other sea-dwelling monsters as well as human travelers on the ocean. Many scylla keep an immobile sea monster called a charybdis as a pet.
While she is removing food and valuables from a ship she has attacked, if a scylla notices an attractive man, she will send one of her tentacles to grab him. Once caught by a tentacle, the suckers will hold fast and are virtually impossible to escape from. The captive will be brought back to the scylla’s lair for later use.
In an emergency, a scylla will use the ink in the jar she wears on her head to cover her escape. She is likely to remain in her lair for some time afterwards, enjoying her latest prisoners, until she is sure her pursuers are no longer in the area.
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Is this the one that everyone wants me to write about? A man caught and tortured by tentacles?
Joined: 16 May 2009 Posts: 18 Location: All over the Interweb
Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 1:34 am Post subject:
Very wrote:
you could always try the "man rapes and tortures tenticles" approach
Well, Very, that just wouldn't keep with what is written about the monster girl Scylla, now would it? I want to stick with the idea behind the description that is given in the MGE's.
I'll give it some time, since only Very is making the choice here. I'm curious about AZ's choice, since he outed me while lurking.
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Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:40 pm Post subject:
Okay. I posted an unedited short series, showing how the world for the MGE came about. I'm sure everyone else will come up with their own ideas, but this was just a way I could see of getting around these creatures being in existence in some what or another.
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Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 2:42 pm Post subject: NEXT!!!
It's official, my next story will feature an Orc. I took one look at that delicious pink thickness and all I could think was "HEEEEEERE piggy piggy piggy piggy!". I'm an ass, I know. But that's what makes life interesting. Anywho, I was already in the market for some mountain real estate, and havin a bunch of hammer-wielding, amorous, totally devoted pig-women running my outpost will be just an added bonus. Score!
Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 8:37 am Post subject: Come Bak
Plz im so interestedin the well notion of the MGE but the two best whriters havent been on in several months and i hav look over the internet for them i beg of them or someone of equal or decent skill to write about this intreging content of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia!!!!!!! _________________ Let the MGE Grow more and more
Posted: Tue Jun 01, 2010 8:57 pm Post subject: Re: Come Bak
MacdaddyG wrote:
Plz im so interestedin the well notion of the MGE but the two best whriters havent been on in several months and i hav look over the internet for them i beg of them or someone of equal or decent skill to write about this intreging content of the Monster Girl Encyclopedia!!!!!!!
Seconded. MJM previously noted that there was far more content than the material referenced in the first post of this thread. Wouldn't mind getting my hands on whatever has been translated to English.
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